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When The Sun Goes Down
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Ongoing, First published Apr 04, 2012
Every time the sun goes down Crisse sneaks out of her bedroom window at her aunties house, and goes down to her spot on the beach, and silently cries thinking about her father and mother who died in a traumatic fire when she was nine. She sits there watching the water flowing so delicately and feels the smooth shiny stones in her enclosed hand which she throws into the water letting go of all the hurt and sadness, as she watches the gorgeous colors fly through the sky. 


Lewies first night in Santa Monica was a hard one, he couldn't get to sleep he was tossing and turning most of the night all he heard was the faint sound of cries coming from the small beach down below his bedroom window.


Little did they know there life was going to change on that faithful night....
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