Trials of Perfection
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Last published Tue, Aug 22, 2017
In a world not far from today, perfection reigns.
18 year old Charli Gray's life is turned upside down when she recieves a letter telling her she has been chosen for The Trials of Perfection. Seemingly everyone around her has heard of the mysterious Commission for Perfection who run this new society, so why hasn't she.
Are the Trials as inhumane as Charli believes? And why do the contestants who have been eliminated keep disappearing?
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