Writer's Workshop (Mason's Writing Reviews)
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I by no means think of myself as an amazingly skilled writer. But that doesn't mean I cant critique
So I've noticed common flaws on popular works on here. Easily avoided mistakes may I add! And it annoys me that stories with no heart, or even a decent plot, all get recommended to everyone. So, here I will be critiquing some Wattpad stories. More info in the first chapter.
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