I'm sorry, I have either finished, or abandoned this story due to immense hate and no critique of other authors. This book will be forgotten soon enough anyway.
I am very sorry you all have to witness this atrocity of a book. Do yourself a favour and just pick something else to read. I can't defend myself. If you continue on after this warning, I won't be liable for your actions.
Also, please stop commenting on the lack of punctuation. I am well aware.