An extract, "...have you ever fallen in love?"
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Complete Fri, Sep 15, 201711m
I have no experience writing but I love to daydream and make up stories. So I have written a little extract with the hope of getting some constructive criticism, any and all comments will be gratefully accepted. Hope you enjoy and that it's not too bad ;)
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