How Amestris Went to Shit
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NOTE: Hi I just randomly decided to log back into wattpad after several years and found this dumpsterfire. This is extremely cringe lmao but I won't delete it. (7/30/2022)
Ling X Nicole X Envy IDK
I guess I was reading a fanfic called 'Just One of Those Days' and there was a question at the end of chapter six: 'What would you do if you woke up in the middle of the night and Ling appeared, demanding you be his empress?'
Just some random shit that came to my head. This is my review of that chapter (with a few edits.)
Warning: this fanfiction contains Nicole's fucked up sense of humour. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.
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