Below the Surface
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Ongoing5m
Last published Sat, Jan 18, 2014
My creepy underwater nightmare. Marie "bubbles" Thompson thought she was just an average girl who was strangely compelled to water. Now she knows the truth and soon so will you. She has been taken by the creatures and locked in an orb. This is her fight for her life while she is below the surface.
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