Untitled, Unfinished Script. (Ep1 Maybe?)

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This is a thing I do for fun in my spare time and I decided to share it, However, I get a lot of writer's block and often don't know if I like what i'm writing, so that is why it came here.
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Anyways, The story is about some small businesses against a really powerful one, At least that's what it is currently.
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It might not even be that good, but I invite you to criticise every part of what I write, it helps me a lot.  And if you like, suggest somethings.All Rights Reserved

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