When Hell Comes (#wattys2017)

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It is written in The Bible that God made man on the Sixth Day and named him Adam, and when man grew lonely, God put him to sleep and from his rib bone, He created the first woman - which God named Eve. Adam and Eve lived happily in the Garden of Eden, until Satan came to Eve in the form of a snake and convinced her to eat the fruits of the Tree of Wisdom - the tree which God Himself had forbidden them to eat from. I'm hoping that most of you have read it and know the story well...
  
But what if... What if when God created Eve, Satan was enchanted by her? What if Satan fell in lust with her, and instead of appearing to her in the form of a snake, Satan appeared in the form of man - the most beautiful man Eve had ever laid eyes on? And what if, instead of convincing Eve to eat the fruit from the Tree of Wisdom, Satan had seduced her, and Eve had then given into temptation? What if Eve had then lost her innocence to Satan then, and in its place she had become filled with lust... And when Eve had then returned to Adam - she gave in to her lust and seduced Adam who had no knowledge of temptation either - he as well gave in to temptation...
  
What if this was the reason Adam and Eve were banned from living in the Garden of Eden?
  
Eve had already been impregnated by Satan's seed, information she had unknowingly kept from Adam. When she gave birth to a son, neither Adam nor she had any reason to doubt that the child was his offspring... And so it came to be that the seed of Satan was carried forth in the bloodline born of the first son, the bloodline into which Stacey Feuerborn had been born 18 years ago...
  
So what happens now? How does this affect her???

Read Stacey's story to find out... Stacey's story takes place under the reign of Queen Victoria, United Kingdom. It is best known as the Victorian era (1837-1901). The precise year would be 1884 (Stacey is now 18).

PLEASE NOTE: THIS STORY IS MERELY FICTIONAL AND DOES NOT PORTRAY THE BELIEFS OF THE AUTHOR!!!All Rights Reserved

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