grey. [COMPLETE] [CONTEST ENTRY]
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  • Reads 96
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  • Parts 2
  • Time 6m
Complete, First published Jul 31, 2017
"when all colour is gone, the rain begins..."
  
  this was a contest entry! it's not my best work but i'm pretty proud of the outcome. the story follows a girl who is colourblind, interlaced with poetic snippets. this girl is never named. she also has an (unnamed) brother who helps her deal with her colourblindness. however, the focus of the story isn't on the condition itself, but the colourblindness is more of a metaphor for her trying to find colour in the grey areas of life. i had to write this story in under 1000 words, so i hope that it's not too poorly written...
  
  anyway, enjoy!
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