Repercussion (ORIGINAL DRAFT)
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Formerly known as "The Woman They Called Alpha."
NOTICE: This story has been completely rewritten. This is the original story, you can find the rewritten slightly less cringey rewrite on my profile.
"I, Jacob Hospice, reject you, Hyria Grace, as my mate." 13 words, 12 spaces, 53 letters, and 1 broken heart.
Hi, my name is Hyria Grace and this is the story of how I became one of the most feared, strongest, revered, cruelest, and ruthless Alphas in the world.
She was an orphan.
She was rejected.
She was a White Wolf.
She was the Omega.
Hyria Grace
He was a player.
He broke himself.
He was a Black Wolf.
He was the Alpha.
Jacob Hospice.
Mates. Exes. Allies. Enemies. Mended. Broken. Love. Hate. When two complete opposites find out that they're mates, Jacob just rejects her. Just because she, and I quote, "wasn't strong enough." Then, Hyria runs away only to become the Alpha of one of the most ruthless packs in the world. She slowly begins to become numb, lose compassion and empathy for living beings, and becomes a ruthless leader with a grudge to reason with.
And after six years, (making Hyria 21) and after Jacob had become alpha. Jacob had summoned Hyria and her pack to help with an out of hand rouge problem. Sparks fly and former mates meet. Oh, god, both packs are fucked.
Will Hyria forgive Jacob? And will Jacob break down Hyria's walls? Most importantly, will Jacob ever be able to keep Hyria as his? Especially when she apparently has a new man in her life who claims to be her second chance mate?
All rights reserved. I own everything except the pictures and base of the cover.
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