Story cover for Repercussion (ORIGINAL DRAFT) by motherpotoot
Repercussion (ORIGINAL DRAFT)
  • WpView
    LECTURAS 39,456
  • WpVote
    Votos 929
  • WpPart
    Partes 20
  • WpHistory
    Hora 2h 27m
  • WpView
    LECTURAS 39,456
  • WpVote
    Votos 929
  • WpPart
    Partes 20
  • WpHistory
    Hora 2h 27m
Concluida, Has publicado ago 01, 2017
Formerly known as "The Woman They Called Alpha."

NOTICE: This story has been completely rewritten. This is the original story, you can find the rewritten slightly less cringey rewrite on my profile.

"I, Jacob Hospice, reject you, Hyria Grace, as my mate." 13 words, 12 spaces, 53 letters, and 1 broken heart.
  
  Hi, my name is Hyria Grace and this is the story of how I became one of the most feared, strongest, revered, cruelest, and ruthless Alphas in the world.
  
  She was an orphan.
  She was rejected.
  She was a White Wolf.
  She was the Omega.
  Hyria Grace
  
  He was a player.
  He broke himself.
  He was a Black Wolf.
  He was the Alpha.
  Jacob Hospice.
  
  Mates. Exes. Allies. Enemies. Mended. Broken. Love. Hate. When two complete opposites find out that they're mates, Jacob just rejects her. Just because she, and I quote, "wasn't strong enough." Then, Hyria runs away only to become the Alpha of one of the most ruthless packs in the world. She slowly begins to become numb, lose compassion and empathy for living beings, and becomes a ruthless leader with a grudge to reason with.
  
  And after six years, (making Hyria 21) and after Jacob had become alpha. Jacob had summoned Hyria and her pack to help with an out of hand rouge problem. Sparks fly and former mates meet. Oh, god, both packs are fucked.
  
  Will Hyria forgive Jacob? And will Jacob break down Hyria's walls? Most importantly, will Jacob ever be able to keep Hyria as his? Especially when she apparently has a new man in her life who claims to be her second chance mate?
  
  All rights reserved. I own everything except the pictures and base of the cover.
  
 #925 in WEREWOLF 8/7/17
 #917 in WEREWOLF 8/11/17
#890 in WEREWOLF 8/12/17
#869 in WEREWOLF 8/15/17
#849 in WEREWOLF 8/16/17
#498 in WEREWOLF 8/20/17
#445 in WEREWOLF 9/14/17
#393 in WEREWOLF 9/15/17
#251 in WEREWOLF 9/16/17
#246 in WEREWOLF 9/17/17
#222 in WEREWOLF 9/26/17
#202 in WEREWOLF 9/27/17
#128 in WEREWOLF 9/28/17
Todos los derechos reservados
Regístrate para añadir Repercussion (ORIGINAL DRAFT) a tu biblioteca y recibir actualizaciones
O
Pautas de Contenido
Quizás también te guste
Alpha Falling For The Omega de mariamagalygg
29 partes Concluida
17. That's how old I am today. It's about time too. I was getting sick of being 16. I hear a low rumble being emitted from my chest. I run towards the woods before the change takes over my body. As soon as I get to the woods near the lake I have come to know and love, ducks are floating in the middle looking for something to eat. I quickly strip down to only my sports braw and shorts, when and excrutiating paing takes over my body and I fall to the ground. My legs were the first to change. The bones snap and change shape for the first time. I scream out in pain as hair starts to grown eerywhere. The rest of my body is snapping and changing shape. My arms were the next to change... I seriously felt like dying. The pain of every first change is unbearable. Thankfully it all soon stops and I am standing on all fours. I walk towards the lake noticing that the ducks that used to be there were long gone. I must have scared them. I went to look at my refelction for the first time. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Adria Walker just turned 17. On her birthday she turned into her wolf. Only to be transferred along with her family to a new pack called Silver Crest. Only to find out on her first day at school that her mate is the possessive over protective player of an Alpha. Good Luck! ~~~~~~~~~~~ A/N: Please note that this is my first werewolf story. I would like to read what you think. Comment, Vote, etc. I want to thanks @shadaralove for making the amazing cover of Alpha falling for the Omega. Love you SARAAA!! Copyright © 2014 by Maria M. Gonzalez All rights reserved. This book or any portion thereof may not be reproduced or used in any manner whatsoever without the express written permission of the publisher except for the use of brief quotations in a book review.
The Alphas Girl de SliceOfSerendipity
11 partes Concluida
I was almost to the door when I remembered the leather jacket I brought. I turned back to the room and just as I entered the most wonderful smell hit my nose. My wolf started to go crazy and I looked up to see a small pale girl with black hair in a bun and pale blue eyes. All my wolf kept saying was MATE over and over again. The room blurred until all I saw was her. She was cleaning up the table when her head snapped up to my direction. Her eyes widened and she instantly bowed her head down and stepped back from me. "I am sorry Alpha Colton I did not know you were coming back." She said shaking in fear. Just then Alpha Andrew walked in and slapped her. "DONT JUST STAND THERE CLEAN THIS SHIT UP!" My wolf sprang forward and I grabbed Alpha Andrews throwing him across the room. I Knew i was on the verge of shifting but it was pointless in trying to calm my wolf. "YOU DARE LAY YOUR HAND ON MY MATE!" I growled then grabbed his head smashing it into the wall knocking him out and turned to my mate. She looked at me with wide frightened eyes and backed away. I knew that my eyes were glowing red and my canines were out but I was pissed and didn't have a good temper. When she stepped away from me again I let out a growl and she instantly froze. "MINE." Charity Andrews is a werewolf who hasn't shifted yet. She is abused and mistreated by her pack for this reason because they don't think she is anything but a worthless human. That all changes when Alpha Colton comes for a meeting. Alpha Colton is the coldest meanest Alpha that many fear. When he goes to Alpha Andrews pack to settle a rivalry he didn't expect his mate to be the packs punching bag. He has been looking for his mate for a long time and now that she is right in front of him he is pissed at what she has gone through.
Markie de Ruhu95
9 partes Concluida
All werewolves have mates. So what happens when you fall for someone before you're 18... "Hopefully hes my mate" is all Markie can think as she waits for her 18th. This is a short story that takes place in the middle of "Orphan Wolf". It can be read independently but will have spoilers if you intend to read "Orphan Wolf"... I of course would suggest you read it and pause at the point I marked to read "Markie" but the choice is yours. Story excerpt "Come on Ryan leave me alone!" A boy yells. "You started it Francis... come on pup don't start that with me... I don't have time for this! GO HOME!" I felt the command. I see the little 8 year old boy from last night run away crying, one of Ruby's cousins. When I turn the corner I see a boy about 20 and am hit with an overpowering smell something like fresh cut wood and autumn leaves. It is amazing. I see the guy turn towards me and duck behind the house I am standing by before he sees me. Nope! Not him! Not happening! I hear footsteps coming towards me and run. Into the woods I find a pine tree. Perfect! Pine trees are great hiding places. The branches hide you visually and the smell masks your scent. I climb up as quickly as I can and watch the guy approaching. He circles my tree looking around but eventually gives up and goes back towards the houses. "Mate!" My wolf happily purs. "Not him!" I respond. "Denial." She says. "Refusal." I counter and she growls at me. "You will NOT reject him!" She orders. "He is a bully!" "He is mate!" "He commanded that kid when he could have just talked to him! He is a bully with no patience!" "He is an Alpha!" She purrs with pride at his rank. I don't care! "I don't want him!" "The one you want isn't mate. He isn't yours. He isn't interested... I want mate!" "No." I block her out and climb down the tree.
Not Rejected, Just Unwanted de blgrabill
18 partes Concluida Contenido adulto
*Formerly known as Omega's Brother on my other account* Isabelle Smith was ranked an Omega at a young age. She was treated worse than the others. She was given the worst of the chores. She was living one day at a time. Until she's kidnapped by a rival pack. Alpha Xavier Knight hates omegas. He's making it his goal to kidnap and murder all of them. That is until he meets his mate. Horrified to be mated with an Omega, he makes her the omega of his pack. Forces her to do things a mate should never do. ********** "The slave is awake." People cheer after hearing this. "Who wants to whip it first?" My eyes widen and I begin to struggle. Sweat forms as I face what's about to happen. "Me!" A girl yells. My heart sinks in my chest. I am so scared. "Two lashes!" I hear people cheering and laughing. No! Please moon goddess! No. I don't scream when the whip connects with my body. I've been through this before. I'm whipped again. I'm whipped 17 times before they stop. The alpha begins to talk but I can't hear anything. There's rushing in my ears. My vision is blurred. I'm in too much pain. I feel a couple more lashes between monologues. Suddenly I'm pushed to the ground with the ropes cut off. My hands behind my back, a gun to my forehead. I cry as the gun is pressed against my head. I look up at the alpha and his cold gaze locks mine. "Mate." I hear that one word despite all the pain. He hesitates before he drops the gun. "Alpha." The beta says shocked. "Take her away." The alpha growls looking at the gun in his hand. "Yes, sir."
The Writer's Heartbreak ( completed) de VioletDoge
39 partes Concluida
"YOU ARE MINE" Blake said. He had his arm around my neck preventing me from escaping. "Get off me you psycho!" I shouted while struggling to get free. "Blake think about what your doing!" Danny said while slowly coming closer. "DON'T COME ANY CLOSER MUTT!" Blake ordered. " You are my mate and no one else have you! MINE!" his wolf said. With that, his eyes turned black and his canines elongates. "Only mine..." he whispers and brought his fangs down upon my neck. "NOOOO!" was the last thing I heard before everything went dark. The day where Scarlet's dream comes true turns to her worst nightmare. Blake Bennett her alpha and mate rejected and humiliated her in front of her pack. Her heart felt like it was being gutted out trampled on. Unable to cope with the rejection, Scarlet fled and plans on suicide until she was found by Danny Walker. 3 years have passed, they both are a couple having a relatively normal life. They live in an apartment with the humans. Scarlet is a writer, she publishes her own books while Danny is an accountant. Everything is happy and dandy until one day she got a letter from her family asking her to visit them. Scarlet misses her family like crazy and wants to meet them but will she be able to go back to the place where all her memories of the rejection and humiliation has taken place? Will she be able to face Blake? Give the book a try :) Forgive me for there are loads of mistakes. I'm pain painstakingly slow on editing them.
Partially Rejected de tyughj80
37 partes Concluida
Hello, this story is not good. It was written by a depressed young tween who didn't understand what an abusive relationship is. I'm only keeping it up because it's my only completed book. Take everything a grain of salt. (It's cringey) So good luck on fixing me and what we could've been But you'll always fail to see I'm forever broken I hate your guts, I hate his too I hate myself for loving you You're the only reason that I hate everyone -Falling in Reverse Alaska is sick of her life. She's sick of everyone. It all started in forth grade when she moved to Colorado. She was a different girl back then... Alaska was naive, had blonde hair, loved people, and was kind. Then she met Dillon he was gorges, tall, strong, and everything Alaska was not. Dillon was a werewolf and next in line for Alpha position of Black Blood Pack. Dillon hates his mate and waiting tell he is old enough to reject her. He dose what he can, ignores her, forgets her, because she is nothing but a pathetic human. Or so she thought... . . . "Get out of my head!" He yelled at me. I stood my ground, because I was here and was not leaving. "What's your problem with me?" I hissed. "Your weak, ugly, pathdic, little human, who I could kill so easily. Unfortunately for me I can't reject you yet!" I didn't know what reject meant I knew it was bad, by the way the silent room went quite. "Well I may be ugly, I may be pathdic, and you know what I'm a weak little human. I may not be able to kill you, you can make my life hell, go ahead, do it. You can hate me with every bone in your body. But if you think for a moment I care your wrong." That was the biggest lie I ever told. What happens when an alpha were wolf and element witch meet? What happens if she doesn't even know she's a witch?
Rejected by one Alpha, Loved by another de Readers-Blog
99 partes Continúa Contenido adulto
"I, Alpha Dylan Langley, Alpha of the waterside pack Reject you, Esme West pack member of waterside west to be my mate and Luna" On Esme's 18th birthday she figured that the Alpha of the pack was her true mate which meant she would be Luna to the waterside pack. She felt the mate bond breaking and it hurt so much. She didn't know if she was string enough to handle the rejection completely. She was holding back her tears to show him no weakness and no emotion towards his rejection. "I, Esme West of the waterside pack accept your rejection to be your mate and Luna of this pack" I turn towards the entrance of the pack gates and slowly walk towards our home where my brother is waiting for me, I didn't want to cry. I heard of the tales of the rejection and the pain it causes to fated mates but I never thought I would be rejected, I especially didn't think the moon goddess would have the Alpha to be my mate. I'm a nothing but a lowly omega. I work for nothing and I am the packs punching bag. Especially the queen be herself who has always wanted Alpha Dylan to be her mate...Adeline carter... Some Wolf's who have been rejected have often left the pack but have not managed to find a new pack who is willing to take them in within the time frame off 2 weeks and they are automatically classed as rogues. Rogues are wolfs who have no packs, some are nice but the thing's I have heard some rogues will kill to get what and where they want to be in the chain. Having a fated was was like finding your other piece to the jigsaw and the tales of it was phenomenal, true love at its finest. My mom and dad are fated mates and they look like they're 18 all over again and fining each other and falling in love over and over. It's rare to get a 2nd chance mate. Can Esme find her second chance mate and find her way out of waterside pack for good or will she be chained to this place forever?
His Luna (HumanxWolf) | ✔ de NehaDarcy
42 partes Concluida Contenido adulto
| Highest rank #1 in Werewolf | Completed+Edited (This is only the first draft so there might be some mistakes here and there.) Spin-off to His Luna: The Prodigal Descendant * "A Wolf will be born so in time, To be mated to a woman who will be a human-- The human who can be a boon or a bane-- She will either bring the entire Wolf race together Or tear all the ties between them apart." It was a gory war--the place in complete ruins and chaos. A blood curdling scream was heard in the distance followed by wails of pain and desperation. The entire battleground was painted scarlet with the munted corpses littering the field. Amongst it all, there was a woman, unlike the rest surrounding her. She was maddened by her love and passion that left her bleeding as her body succumbed to the wound and she fell limp in her Mate's arms. The Alpha was driven into insanity as he held on to his unmoving Mate's frail body. The world seemed to collapse around him as he could see the life fading from the love of his life's eyes. The smile of content on her lifeless face, haunting him, taunting him as all he could do was scream for her to return to him. How will their lives turn out when destiny brings together an egoistic, arrogant but somehow charming Christian King and a headstrong and equally proud woman, Tiara Summers who has quite a few secrets in her bag? * Do not promote your works on my story. That is very rude and disrespectful. Those comments will be deleted as soon as I see them. P.S. Bear with me, I started writing this when I was 15! * Cover_credit:- @A_BookieMonster (isn't it amazing? <3 ) Started : 20/08/2016 Completed : 31/12/2017 Edited : 22/11/2018 [200,000-220,000 words]
I'll see you in hell de OliAndTheDiamonds
15 partes Concluida
"No way in hell are we mates," Cameron spat, his greenish-blue eyes glinting with hatred as he sneered at me. Ignoring the sensation of my heart breaking, I lifted my head, pushing back the tears brimming in my eyes and glared at him, clenching my hands in a fist behind my back as my wolf howled in pain. "Then it's settled. I reject you as my mate Clara Smith. I don't ever want to see you again, you pathetic mute worthless loser," he shot back, walking away before I could punch the shit out of him. 'I'll see you in hell Cameron!' I mentally yelled, flipping him the bird at his retreating back. As soon as he turned the corner, I dropped the smirk on my face and slid down the wall until I was huddled on the floor and letting a solitary tear leak out of my eye as my composure crumbled. ********************************* Clara Smith and Cameron Claw are sworn enemies since the day the accident happened. So when they find out that they're mates, Cameron immediately rejects her. Broken to the core and missing her wolf, Clara turns to her family for support only to realise that the alpha's son rejecting her is the final straw. Clara hasn't spoken a single word since she was born due to reasons she doesn't even know and her family is sick of it. Thrown out onto the street, Clara struggles to survive, relying on cash from strange men and scraps from the street bins. When everything finally starts to turn around for Clara, she finds a job and home, a mysterious boy takes interest in her, suddenly Cameron wants her back. Will she ever forgive Cameron for breaking her heart and follow her hearts desire or will Cameron lose his mate forever? Yes I know very cliche haha but I wanted to have fun with a story like this. Yes these characters are also in Saving Lola, they're sorta companion stories to each other but you don't have to read it to understand what's going on :3 Thank you for giving my story a chance! <3
Quizás también te guste
Slide 1 of 9
Alpha Falling For The Omega cover
The Alphas Girl cover
Markie cover
Not Rejected, Just Unwanted cover
The Writer's Heartbreak ( completed) cover
Partially Rejected cover
Rejected by one Alpha, Loved by another cover
His Luna (HumanxWolf) | ✔ cover
I'll see you in hell cover

Alpha Falling For The Omega

29 partes Concluida

17. That's how old I am today. It's about time too. I was getting sick of being 16. I hear a low rumble being emitted from my chest. I run towards the woods before the change takes over my body. As soon as I get to the woods near the lake I have come to know and love, ducks are floating in the middle looking for something to eat. I quickly strip down to only my sports braw and shorts, when and excrutiating paing takes over my body and I fall to the ground. My legs were the first to change. The bones snap and change shape for the first time. I scream out in pain as hair starts to grown eerywhere. The rest of my body is snapping and changing shape. My arms were the next to change... I seriously felt like dying. The pain of every first change is unbearable. Thankfully it all soon stops and I am standing on all fours. I walk towards the lake noticing that the ducks that used to be there were long gone. I must have scared them. I went to look at my refelction for the first time. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Adria Walker just turned 17. On her birthday she turned into her wolf. Only to be transferred along with her family to a new pack called Silver Crest. Only to find out on her first day at school that her mate is the possessive over protective player of an Alpha. Good Luck! ~~~~~~~~~~~ A/N: Please note that this is my first werewolf story. I would like to read what you think. Comment, Vote, etc. I want to thanks @shadaralove for making the amazing cover of Alpha falling for the Omega. Love you SARAAA!! Copyright © 2014 by Maria M. Gonzalez All rights reserved. This book or any portion thereof may not be reproduced or used in any manner whatsoever without the express written permission of the publisher except for the use of brief quotations in a book review.