Repercussion (ORIGINAL DRAFT)
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Formerly known as "The Woman They Called Alpha."
NOTICE: This story has been completely rewritten. This is the original story, you can find the rewritten slightly less cringey rewrite on my profile.
"I, Jacob Hospice, reject you, Hyria Grace, as my mate." 13 words, 12 spaces, 53 letters, and 1 broken heart.
Hi, my name is Hyria Grace and this is the story of how I became one of the most feared, strongest, revered, cruelest, and ruthless Alphas in the world.
She was an orphan.
She was rejected.
She was a White Wolf.
She was the Omega.
Hyria Grace
He was a player.
He broke himself.
He was a Black Wolf.
He was the Alpha.
Jacob Hospice.
Mates. Exes. Allies. Enemies. Mended. Broken. Love. Hate. When two complete opposites find out that they're mates, Jacob just rejects her. Just because she, and I quote, "wasn't strong enough." Then, Hyria runs away only to become the Alpha of one of the most ruthless packs in the world. She slowly begins to become numb, lose compassion and empathy for living beings, and becomes a ruthless leader with a grudge to reason with.
And after six years, (making Hyria 21) and after Jacob had become alpha. Jacob had summoned Hyria and her pack to help with an out of hand rouge problem. Sparks fly and former mates meet. Oh, god, both packs are fucked.
Will Hyria forgive Jacob? And will Jacob break down Hyria's walls? Most importantly, will Jacob ever be able to keep Hyria as his? Especially when she apparently has a new man in her life who claims to be her second chance mate?
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I was almost to the door when I remembered the leather jacket I brought. I turned back to the room and just as I entered the most wonderful smell hit my nose. My wolf started to go crazy and I looked up to see a small pale girl with black hair in a bun and pale blue eyes. All my wolf kept saying was MATE over and over again. The room blurred until all I saw was her. She was cleaning up the table when her head snapped up to my direction. Her eyes widened and she instantly bowed her head down and stepped back from me. "I am sorry Alpha Colton I did not know you were coming back." She said shaking in fear. Just then Alpha Andrew walked in and slapped her. "DONT JUST STAND THERE CLEAN THIS SHIT UP!" My wolf sprang forward and I grabbed Alpha Andrews throwing him across the room. I Knew i was on the verge of shifting but it was pointless in trying to calm my wolf. "YOU DARE LAY YOUR HAND ON MY MATE!" I growled then grabbed his head smashing it into the wall knocking him out and turned to my mate. She looked at me with wide frightened eyes and backed away. I knew that my eyes were glowing red and my canines were out but I was pissed and didn't have a good temper. When she stepped away from me again I let out a growl and she instantly froze. "MINE." Charity Andrews is a werewolf who hasn't shifted yet. She is abused and mistreated by her pack for this reason because they don't think she is anything but a worthless human. That all changes when Alpha Colton comes for a meeting. Alpha Colton is the coldest meanest Alpha that many fear. When he goes to Alpha Andrews pack to settle a rivalry he didn't expect his mate to be the packs punching bag. He has been looking for his mate for a long time and now that she is right in front of him he is pissed at what she has gone through.
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