Deewana at "First sight"

Hey readers it is my first Short story . Please co-operate with my mistakes.
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Story Description:-
Life is totally based on the love, hate, destiny, fate, relationships....So in this story the childhood haters can been seen has future Romeo and Juliet.In there life, the hate turns into love with the help of the destiny.

The boy had a crush on his girl, when he saw her first time has the time passes he became her deewana but always behaves as a arrogant person towards her.This lead to misunderstanding in her.But our Big Boss(destiny) had its now plan to make them a couple.
To keep his promise he again made his way in her life .

In this story you will find how the boy keeps his promise to whom he made, is suspicious .................. To know, look into the story .

Hope I will do my job very good in expressing each situation of love and destiny .......

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