Warrior Cats: Burnt To A Crispts

My paws pounded down on the hot, burnt forest floor. My rear end was sweating, as the fire crept up on me. My ears heard my paws pounding on the ground and my nose scented out my camp. My blind eyes shone in the dark before me, then disappeared if I would be caught by the flames. I heard the yowls of my clan, so I ran faster. I sprinted across the forest, towards the scent of my precious clan. By then it was too late...Or so it seemed.

This story is about a gray, blind she-cat saving her clan from a forest fire. This will be in first person. Why? Because I want it to be. The cat, EchoSong, is the main character. All of her family members died, and she is mainly miserable She has a mate, RedFoot, who you meet, but he is mainly dead. She will retire before she becomes the leader, which she dies the same day because of the loners disagreeing with her decision of the new ThunderClan Leader, ScorchSoul. Why do loners kill her, you may ask? Because they are old ThunderClan Warriors and hate ScorchSoul because of his evil trait, and they want the best for their old clan. I'm gonna shut up now.