Voces narrativas
- Reads 1,380
- Votes 33
- Parts 10
Ongoing17m
Last published Sun, Aug 6, 2017
La elección de la voz narrativa que usarás para tu historia, así como el uso apropiado de ésta, son factores fundamentales que pueden contribuir (o entorpecer) el desarrollo de la misma. Es por ello que nos dimos a la tarea de hacer una pequeña selección de ellas para luego ejemplificarlas en pequeños textos.
No es fácil elegir una, lo sabemos, es por ello que con cada voz te diremos una lista de pros y contras tales como capacidad de interacción, movimiento, desvelamiento de la historia y control de los personajes.
Del mismo modo, te pedimos que tomes en cuenta que, dependiendo cuál sea la voz que acostumbras a usar, algunas podrían resultarte mucho más complicadas que otras
El texto a partir del cual se desarrollaron los ejemplos, es el siguiente:
"Alejandra fue al coliseo y se encontró con un león que olvidaron volver a encerrar después de la función, presa del pánico trató de huir pero al final el minino se la comió"
All Rights Reserved
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
You may also like
Finally, Free
On the dark obsidian floor lied a man. He's quite famous, actually, known as the biggest, baddest villain on the entire SMP. So bad were his crimes that he is now contained in a small, black room that doesn't even fit to be called a prison. He hasn't seen the sunlight in months, and honestly was quite devoid of human contact. Oh right, forgot about the tortures. The only thing that went through the man's mind these days were memories. Thoughts of the past, laughters of yesterday, all that joy and goodness. Suddenly, he had a vision. He awkwardly dragged his body towards the light, which shone forever so brightly like the gateway to freedom. Was that...? Suddenly, he realized something. He smiled. [Dream tried to swim in lava.] ••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦•••• CW// This is a Ghostdre fanfiction and includes gore, death, $u!$!0e, abuse/torture, angst, and overall some pretty negative stuff. So if you're uncomfortable with any of this, feel free to click off and check out stories from other awesome writers. Also, the cover and other fanarts I post in this story are by me (unless stated otherwise), so if you want to share/post/use it for whatever reason please cite the source. Thanks :)Complete
Melloyern: 13 Land Under Holy Crystal Blessing
"You sure you want to be a magician?" ask an old woman to a boy. "yes Granny Ren. I will be the greatest magician of all Melloyern." He said enthusiastically as the Granny softly caress his small and smooth hand. The boy then ran to his friends as one of them calling him to play football. The Granny look at the boy silently with a solemn smile. Her eye narrow in a soft and gentle gaze she give to the kids that was playing at her yard. "He will be." she said before stand and walk to a well. The boy were born as a normal human. There is no easy way for him to be a magician. he has no mana in him. Or that's what everyone expect from him. Writer: "Hey, that's enough reminiscing about your past. it's the story description section. Not the story yet!" Nakajima: "Fine. I will start with the description." Writer: " good. get back to work." 13 Land Under Holy Crystal Blessing, as the name suggest, It was about a holy crystal that blessed a land. like a mainland or somesort. So... Writer: "is that really the right way to make a description?" Nakajima: *sigh* There is a mainland with 13 state under a flag named Melloyern. These all 13 state have it's very own holy crystal that bless the state individually. But, the crystal contains powerful amount of mana that makes every single person in Melloyern going for it. A group of magician called Denials were up to collect all of the crystal to keep them safe from wrong hands. There is a lot of hindrance in their path such as the Kingdom of Melloyern itself is turning against these guys. Still there are more. Can they survive? it's up to them to decide. Can they achieve what they aim for? It's always up to them to decide their own future. Nakajima: "Satisfied?" Writer: *Claps his hands many time* "Very much." Nakajima: " Can I keep daydreaming?" Writer: " what did you say? You also in the story so... get in there!" Nakajima: *sigh and step into the story*Complete
Darkest hours (G!P)
This world is set in the past. In a time where nothing was impossible, Where dragons fly above our heads. We learned to ride them, and become friends with them. We created artifacts that make our dragos small and then big again when we need them. That's what sets our world into two sides. A side where dragon riders lived and flew on them. And a side where they hated dragons, and the one that rode them. Even though we managed to work in peace, there was no war between us. Only fights that were under control and rules. In the Arena in the city called Aeloria. A city where there were both sides. They mostly ignored each other. But it was hard to get in this city. Mostly it was the people that lived there. And a few outsiders, but that was either the sellers, chosen group of warriors or dragon riders, and lastly the best fighters of the academies that went into the arena. To prove who is stronger and the winner will receive high quality weapons or any other things of their choice. One day the darkness came and war started. Not between us, but with a kingdom that was across the sea. And this battle or war changed everything we knew. I'm Ardyn, I'm on the side where we ride on dragons. And this story can be easy but also hard to understand. But I will still share it. But first we have to start from the beginning. What will this story bring? Will we be able to see the outcome? Let's wait and see. --------------------------------------------- "Get on!" Leora screams at Ardyn. Extending her hand for her to take. "No, I'm not getting there I hate ships." I shook my head and took a step back. Leora sighed and shook her head in mocked amusement. "Are you telling me you are able to fly on a dragon. But you are scared of standing on a ship. Don't make me laugh." "Yes. So what, I'm not getting on." I said angry and she grabbed my hand and pulled me up. (⚠️ Intersex, violation, sex scenes ⚠️) Grammar mistakes, probably bad intimate scenes (I'm bad at writing them.)
She Kills (2016)
Fun and a bit of sex mixed with travels and introspection. That is "She Kills". This novel was supposed to be the sequel of "Abat-Jour", my novel published by Inknbeans in 2015, that was about four guys and a series of trips to Spain in the summer of 2001 to provide a slice of life of a generation, mixed with irony, surreal meetings and a good dose of introspection. For those (all of you guys, I guess!) who didn't read "Abat-Jour": the story starts from the end: Daniele, the main character, has just come home from the last journey. As he rests on his bed, he looks back on what happened in his life in the last few months, inspired by shadows and things in his room. What comes out, in the shape of this journey, is a search for answers to questions of an entire generation. The narrator, Daniele, takes the reader jumping forward and back in months and years, collecting emotions and memories with a musical trace of U2's songs, always present. Everything finds its own place, eventually, in the puzzle of Daniele's memory illuminated in his Abat-Jour.. "She Kills" is also a fiction novel with 58.000 words estimated. It's about what happened to them from 2001 to 2015. I could say there's a mix of fiction and a true story in both of them. They're full of irony and weird situations but they mainly represent a generation between what it was before and after a critical age (the attacks of 9/11 represent a big divide). They were thirty years old but not ready to become men yet. The main character has a lover and a love story that changes him a lot in both novels. In the first one the girl was Eva, a Spanish girl who seems to be more than a summer story. The novel shows how bad things can go when you don't wanna grow up. In the sequel, there's a German woman named Ele who will bring Lele almost to craziness. At the end, despite all the weird, dramatic and funny situations, Lele realizes that there's no more time to waste in silly relationships in the worst possible way.Complete
PAUBAYA
[ Fiction story based and inspired by a YouTube comment under Paubaya Official Music video of Moira Dela Torre. Name and person mentioned is NOT REAL or related to the owner of the story to which this was inspired from. the excerpt is pulled from Youtube comment. All credits to her.] [The Story of us. We met in school. We were each other's greatest competitor. We were not fond of each other. But as the months passed by, we started to know each other, we had shared a couple of back stories as we worked on our group presentation. We became friends, then close friends, and then after a year, we became lovers. But just when I thought that everything was in their right place, my biggest downfall came. After our third anniversary, he started to become cold. He no longer joins me studying, he was even reasoning out that he's tired all the time and that he couldn't send me home. I said it was fine, I can manage. I thought it was just that, but it wasn't. I decided to confront him, I went to his condo and there, my greatest fear welcomed me without warning. He was with a woman, a pregnant woman. He was holding her like she's the most fragile thing on earth. They looked so happy. I didn't know how I managed to compose myself and walked towards them. As soon as our eyes met, he froze. I looked at the woman tensely and lifted my hand as I introduced myself as his classmate and she introduced herself as his girlfriend for a year, already. He said he loves her more. That every time we are together, his mind was with her. He said I make him hard, but she makes him weak. He said I make him feel special, but she makes him feel loved. He told me to punch him and berate him for he would rather end our relationship than leave her and their baby.] But the story, my story doesn't end there because I chose to move forward and be the strong woman that I am.Complete
The unreachable mountain
"You're unbearable!" He kicks her with utter contempt. "Please tell me where I'm wrong, causing you discomfort was not my intention," she said crying, causing him to hit her against the ground again. "Do you think you can live with good intentions? Didn't you have all the time you wanted to change and learn? You still dare to ask for more!" He yells at her with hatred, he blamed her for being the one will cause a woman to be beaten; He didn't want to be that kind of man. However, what he lived with her caused him to bring out what he hated the most about himself from within. -Forget it love- said a woman who was next to her- it's not worth it- this dog was supposed to be her friend, she was supposed to support her just like she did; however he managed so that he and she hated each other and thus be able to steal it. The woman on the floor does not know how much she was framed and harmed by her naivety, nor did she know that this was the beginning of her misfortunes. Because of that woman she did not stop suffering, wherever she went she suffered verbal or physical abuse and everything was orchestrated by this woman; she didn't know until she was about to faint. "Why?" She asked this unarmed woman without knowing why she hated him so much. She never did anything to hurt him. She just laughed viciously without answering him, she didn't have to waste her time with an insect; leaving La to die imprisoned in the house where she was kidnapped. "Answer me!" She got up from her bed screaming "Eh? This looks like my room; Did I reincarnate myself in the past?" She ran to the bathroom just to see that her assumption was correct. She thanked the heavens for this second chance by promising that she wouldn't be fooled a second time.Complete
'i don't have anywhere else to go.' - a sleepy boys inc story
"Tommy? What- it's 2 in the morning-" Phil is shaken from his half awake daze at the sight of Tommy, on his doorstep, looking like he's been through hell and back. "Hi. I-I don't have anywhere else to go. Can I stay-" Phil interrupts him with a soft, "Come in." started 17 jan 2021 finished 8 feb 2022 wow okay fuck wilbur soot i should have had worse things happen to him CW for swearing - no really there's a lot of swearing i'm warning you now TW for cutting/self harm, physical abuse, panic attacks, vomiting, ed, depression, anxiety, flashbacks, PTSD, nightmares, kidnapping, alcohol abuse, domestic abuse if i need to add any other tw's i will do so - if you want me to add any just ask and i will :) no romance, purely platonic family dynamic (some dreamnotfound but not shipping any of the main characters) THIS DOES NOT REFLECT THE IRL PEOPLE IN ANY WAY. if they are uncomfortable with this i will take it down immediately.Complete
Zᴏᴍʙɪᴇ | Uɴᴅᴇᴀᴅ!Tᴏᴍᴍʏɪɴɴɪᴛ AU
A young blonde boy wakes up in the middle of the forest. He can't remember how he got there or much about himself either. His name is blank from his mind, and he can't even remember his family. His clothes are torn and dirty, and he wonders what happened. He's not hungry, but he wants a small snack, yet every apple tree and every berry bush he passes doesn't strike his fancy. He eventually makes it to a city. Large buildings are fallen over and the ones still standing have busted out windows and/or have smoke and fire coming from them. He can hear distant screams and yells and gunshots. There are people passing him that are strange. They're badly injured and walk slightly hunched over. Some are missing limbs, and some are missing and eye, or both. They don't even appear to be alive to the boy. They look his way but don't mind him. Tommy is confused and scared. He can slightly remember this place to be his once home, and it makes him upset that's it's gone to such shit, and scared by everyone's screams and the fires and the fighting, and mostly, the fact that some people are eating each other. And why are people running from the boy when they see him? ~~~ TW// Cussing Blood Gore Fighting/violence Cannibalism Guns Weapons Injuries etc... ~~~ Started: January 14, 2023 Finished: January 15, 2023Complete
꒰ ˖ ࣪⊹💤𓂅 𝙙𝙧𝙚𝙖𝙢𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙤𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪... ミ🌱₊˚⟡ 💭 ꒱ (resident evil 4)
you don't know much about your biological parents; all you know is that they worked serious jobs and had sadly passed quite early into their careers. you were then adopted, but not by any 𝘯𝘰𝘳𝘮𝘢𝘭 family: a specific, political family, well-known and favored by many... ...but, also, possibly 𝗵𝗮𝘁𝗲𝗱 by many too: and they are known as the 𝗴𝗿𝗮𝗵𝗮𝗺'𝘀, the current presidential family of the united states of america. but was it really all the "glitz- and-glamour" people idolize the celebrity life to be like in their heads, having to always be in the limelight? especially when you, and your rivaled, younger sibling had been kidnapped and made a cause for a political affair, in hopes of gaining control of the u.s. executive branch, and thereby, the whole world? will you survive, will any- one try to save you, and if they do, will they succeed? (leon s. kennedy x fem!reader ff) ( 𝙐𝙉𝙀𝘿𝙄𝙏𝙀𝘿 ) lowercase intended. 𝗜𝗡𝗖𝗟𝗨𝗗𝗘𝗦: re4/re4r + separate ways remake. [ y/n will be customizable, but i want to let you know: y/n will be opposite to ashley. this is to contrast the two characters as there will be friction between them for story purposes. it will be alluded that y/n is partially of spanish descent-whether she is spanish, latina, or even southeast asian, that's up to you-but it will not be too obvious for the reader's sake. the two girls won't HATE each other, but there will be rivalry (& shared ada wong jealousy lol) for opposing reasons. may include some ada x reader (+ x leon x luis x wesker) + luis x reader (+ x ashley) + wesker x reader + krauser x reader + ramón x reader + saddler x reader. ]!["My Little Monster~"|| Selever X Reader [DISCONTINUED]](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/268673945-256-k202187.jpg)
"My Little Monster~"|| Selever X Reader [DISCONTINUED]
Hello! This is my first book so there will probably be some Errors but i'll try my best to fix it. Also English is not my native language so pardon my bad grammar😅😅😅 . Anyway here are some keywords: (Y/N) = Your Name (L/N) = Last Name (H/C) = Hair Colour (H/L) = Hair Length (F/C) = Favourite Colour (S/F/C) = Second Favourite Colour (F/F) = Favorite Food (F/D) = Favourite Drink (F/S) =Favourite Sweet (B/N) = Brother's Name (M/N) = Mother's Name (F/N) = Father's Name __________________________________________________________________________________ You're on college btw and (Y/N) is female. here's a peek at my book. _________________________________________It was a sunday morning and you were making lunch for you and you're roommates. Suddenly you got a call from the headmaster saying that you and your roommates would be having a new roommate and that they would be arriving after lunch. ~Time Skip~ You were playing video games on the couch when you heard a knock on the door. You were confused on why there were knocking on the door because it was Sunday and most of the students were out doing god knows what. Then you suddenly remembered that the headmaster told you that you were having a new roommate today. You opened the door and you see a cute half human half demon boy. "Oh! You must be our new roommate. Nice to meet you, My name's (Y/N) (L/N)." You introduced yourself. "Sup cutie. The names Selever nice to meet you." ............... That's all folks! If you want more of this story, I suggest you read this book. Edit: Just a fair warning. Some chapters may have been jumbled Because of an error so please check the chapters before you read them please.Complete
On the dark obsidian floor lied a man. He's quite famous, actually, known as the biggest, baddest villain on the entire SMP. So bad were his crimes that he is now contained in a small, black room that doesn't even fit to be called a prison. He hasn't seen the sunlight in months, and honestly was quite devoid of human contact. Oh right, forgot about the tortures. The only thing that went through the man's mind these days were memories. Thoughts of the past, laughters of yesterday, all that joy and goodness. Suddenly, he had a vision. He awkwardly dragged his body towards the light, which shone forever so brightly like the gateway to freedom. Was that...? Suddenly, he realized something. He smiled. [Dream tried to swim in lava.] ••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦••••♦•••• CW// This is a Ghostdre fanfiction and includes gore, death, $u!$!0e, abuse/torture, angst, and overall some pretty negative stuff. So if you're uncomfortable with any of this, feel free to click off and check out stories from other awesome writers. Also, the cover and other fanarts I post in this story are by me (unless stated otherwise), so if you want to share/post/use it for whatever reason please cite the source. Thanks :)
More detailsContent Guidelines