Voces narrativas
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La elección de la voz narrativa que usarás para tu historia, así como el uso apropiado de ésta, son factores fundamentales que pueden contribuir (o entorpecer) el desarrollo de la misma. Es por ello que nos dimos a la tarea de hacer una pequeña selección de ellas para luego ejemplificarlas en pequeños textos.
No es fácil elegir una, lo sabemos, es por ello que con cada voz te diremos una lista de pros y contras tales como capacidad de interacción, movimiento, desvelamiento de la historia y control de los personajes.
Del mismo modo, te pedimos que tomes en cuenta que, dependiendo cuál sea la voz que acostumbras a usar, algunas podrían resultarte mucho más complicadas que otras
El texto a partir del cual se desarrollaron los ejemplos, es el siguiente:
"Alejandra fue al coliseo y se encontró con un león que olvidaron volver a encerrar después de la función, presa del pánico trató de huir pero al final el minino se la comió"
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What if techno never broke dream out? It's been almost 5 years since they locked him up, 5 years without seeing the world. Just a plain dark room filled with hot lava. It's been way too long. He was losing his mind. That's when Quackity had gone too far and made Dream lose his memories. Now all the boy remembers where those bad memories of the people he cared about leaving him and the awful things he had done to them. He didn't want to remember it. He wanted it all to end. No more Dream. And his wish actually came true. As the members on the server had voted whether Dream would be executed or spared. Majority voted for his execution and so it'll be. Right when his execution was happening someone had crashed the 'party' right on time and was able to rescue him. Though he questioned why this man was helping him after all those awful things he did. "Why are you helping me? "Doesn't everyone hates me" _______________ Some TW: . Death . Blood . Torture(Gore) . Cannibalism . Suicide attempts . Eating disorder . Execution I'll put more through the book to make sure you'll know what will happen. Also this is my first ever dream angst book so bare with me. S.D: November 4, 2022 E.D: May 24, 2023 (Edit 1: Tysm for 16K views💗) (Edit 2: I regret making this)
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