Each painful breath
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Last published Mon, Aug 7, 2017
Sometimes the hero's story isn't happy
-warning- mentions of death war depression suicide and many other things if you are sensitive please take care of yourself
I had to do a story based off a poem for English (the charge of the light brigade by Alfred lord Tennyson) so I decided to post it here. Constructive criticism is encouraged but don't be rude please.
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