Dead Ship (a work in progress)

(feel free to leave any suggestions in the comments below)ancient forces are at play in this works I like to call Dead Ship, the dead are returning and there is nothing anyone can do about it, young soldier John Crat is taking a well deserved break after a year and a half tour of active duty, his family have surprised him with a small cruise across the North Atlantic ocean, what horrors will be awakened for young Mr John Crat when his ship just happens to fall pray to that of the famous Titanic, it's not the waters one has to worry about, it's whats in them that really hurts...