Into Skyrim
- Reads 1,065
- Votes 116
- Parts 19
MatureOngoing2h 58m
Last published Thu, Apr 4, 2019
WHY AM I EDITING?
It was so bad. So, so bad. Just a whole lot of cringing tbh. I promise my writing has improved dramatically since I began it!
HOW IS IT BEING FIXED?
•I'm going through one chapter at a time to edit them.
•I'm going to be mashing 2-3 chapters together to make each one longer, and I'll of course delete the ones I took from.
•I'm also taking out most of the filler chapters and will either A)edit them into the plot progressing chapters, or B)delete them all together. It'll depend on how much I like the filler chapter.
WHEN WILL YOU BE DONE EDITING?
IDK. I don't think it'll take super long as long as I don't overwork myself and burn out. I'm already making pretty good progress with it, I'm currently editing the chapters now and its going smoothly.
OTHER CHANGES
•There will be more mature language because that's just the way Kayleen/Kayleighn thinks and talks. She's got a dirty mouth. Before, I tried not to use as much swearing, but that just made her seem "not her" for lack of a better way of putting it.
•I also recently had an idea for a third protagonist that I want to incorporate, so I'm adding him into it as I go.
•And I decided I want to make our original protagonists different races than they were originally to make it more diverse like a D&D party.
You'll see the differences after I'm done editing.
All Rights Reserved
Join the largest storytelling communityGet personalized story recommendations, save your favourites to your library, and comment and vote to grow your community.
You may also like
Nightshade Maid
When a poor Breton slave meets a master thief who for some reason decides to help her. Viriel was a servant and Brynjolf was a lowly thief. They both fight to stay together and keep each other safe. Will Viriel survive her life as a servant long enough to get out?(description will be edited) Started August 10, 2025. Finished August 15, 2025. Cover is mine obvi(that's why it's lazy I guess). I don't own Skyrim or its characters. I only own Viriel and her pictures. First time writing seriously in maybe three years. Chapters will be published daily(for the most part). This story will contain mature content. Also, I've come to realize that the villain in this story is basically just Cinderella's evil stepmother. I will be writing another Skyrim fanfic after this one with the Taliesin mod.Complete
The King Of All Vampire Kings (Book 1) ✔️ new edition coming soon:)
Book 1 of (The Awakening Series) {#1 Supernatural} {#1 Paranormal} {#1 Lycans} {#1 Vampire Romance} {#5 Royalty} The world went to shit long before I was born. Humans like me use to believe other species were nothing more than fictional characters, myths, or figures of one's imagination. But that was before vampires left the shadows and decided to reveal their species to the world. I've been told that teenage girls use to fantasize about being swooshed off their feet by those mysterious creatures. Insane. Matter of fact, insane would be an understatement, they were fucking lunatics. Vampires are not some fictional character that would love you like no other. No, vampires are not some sort of myth, and they most certainly are not, a figment of anyone's imagination. They are very real, and they despise the human race. In fact, they have enslaved my entire species and formed a new world. Each continent is owned by a ruthless, bloodsucking, barbaric, the vampire king. Every single one of them has played a part in the war of the awakening, showing no mercy, killing without question. Humans didn't even stand a chance. Our army and world leaders were killed or imprisoned in less than a couple of days. They slaughtered my race, but it didn't stop there. No, that was only the beginning of human suffering. Trust me when I say the death was truly a kindness, because anyone who survived the awakening, would beg for death. I was positive that my suffering would come to an end when I turned eighteen. I was hoping and praying to be marked as a feeder, nothing more, nothing less. Death was the only way out of this world. You see, all of the kings who ruled over the earth were cruel and calculating. They are all tyrants in their own right and they all answered to one vampire. Who was known as the most barbaric of them all and I was marked as his chosen. The King of all Vampire Kings. "This book is currently undergoing edits for publication."Complete
Murder Drones Swap AU
T̶h̶i̶s̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶m̶y̶ ̶f̶i̶r̶s̶t̶ ̶b̶o̶o̶k̶ ̶a̶n̶d̶ ̶b̶a̶s̶i̶c̶a̶l̶l̶y̶ ̶i̶ ̶w̶i̶l̶l̶ ̶b̶e̶ ̶r̶e̶c̶r̶e̶a̶t̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶s̶o̶m̶e̶ ̶s̶c̶e̶n̶e̶s̶ ̶b̶y̶ ̶a̶d̶d̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶d̶i̶f̶f̶e̶r̶e̶n̶t̶ ̶a̶n̶d̶ ̶n̶e̶w̶ ̶d̶i̶a̶l̶o̶g̶u̶e̶ ̶b̶u̶t̶ ̶m̶o̶s̶t̶ ̶o̶f̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶e̶v̶e̶n̶t̶s̶ ̶w̶i̶l̶l̶ ̶p̶l̶a̶y̶ ̶o̶u̶t̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶s̶a̶m̶e̶ ̶b̶u̶t̶ ̶a̶t̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶s̶a̶m̶e̶ ̶t̶i̶m̶e̶ ̶d̶i̶f̶f̶e̶r̶e̶n̶t̶l̶y̶.̶ ̶l̶o̶l̶ ̶h̶o̶p̶e̶ ̶t̶h̶a̶t̶ ̶m̶a̶k̶e̶s̶ ̶s̶o̶m̶e̶w̶h̶a̶t̶ ̶s̶e̶n̶s̶e̶.̶ Nope Im just rewriting the entire thing, not everything is in proper order and I will delete a few pages deemed as completely unnecessary to me. Lotta swears, crappy ass grammar n punctuation from time to time, lotta useless slangs and abbreviations too etcc. The pages will be around 1000 words(more or less) Go check out my other stories :D actually maybe dont..yeah no dont do it, theyre too old, yall gonna see my cringey ahh style from a year ago💀💀 FINALLY FIXED THE COVER HEEHEEFEHUEJIFOD not perfect but yay i did something :DDDDDDDDDDDDDD other ongoing bs in this book are rewrites/updates, drawings, theories, yapping/thoughts still related to murder drones and just talking in general so trauma dump all you'd like :D feel free to say whatever tf u wanna say bc i like talking to ppl, requests, memes (I make no promises anymore but I do end up following requests after months and it def looks like a lazy ass bitchy move fr so im sorry if ive never fulfilled the requests in time or anything :[) Stuff ive head cannoned and just randomly added for the plot in the story: Nick x Z duh (idk Z just sounds cooler than SD-U) Jade x T (They are kinda gonna be like duncney without gwen *cough cough V *cough) Cyn and Nick as step sibilings (shoulda just done them as actual sibilings but whatev-)
Yeah, I Rejected You
Then it hit me. The scent of my mate. The one I'd love and spend the rest of my days with. "Mine," he growled. I was forced up against the wall as he began to kiss me roughly. I managed to take a peek at my mate. The school's very own player. Otherwise known as the guy who infuriates me to the depths of hell. I shoved him off me and made him look me in the eye, "I don't care if you're going to be Alpha. You will always be the jerk I hate and the player I despise. I will not be looked upon as another of your minions. Yeah, I just rejected you." I snarled. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Shayla Hale is just another 15 year old werewolf, eagerly waiting for her 16th birthday so she can find her mate. She wasn't popular, and she wasn't a loner. Following her around, was the school's player, with a hobby of annoying her. She hated him for taking so much interest in her, since she knew all he was is a disappointment. Chase Anderson is the school's player, and the guy every girl swoons for. He's always found Shayla interesting, since she wasn't like the others. Witty comebacks, never sparing him a second glance. Being the hard to resist, soon to be Alpha of his Dark Wolfe pack, he needs to find his Luna. What he wasn't prepared for was his very own mate rejecting him. Will Shayla stay true to her word? Will Chase prove his mate wrong? What happens when Chase goes back to his player ways? How about when Shayla's childhood lover returns? *** I wrote this when I was 12/13 and it was the first romance/teen-fic/werewolf story I ever wrote at the time. Please go easy on my 12/13 year old self 😬Complete
Abnormal Little Me (Completed)
"You actually thought you could get away from me, didn't you, Rishka?" I turned around, shaking. Sadist was standing there, a creepy smile on his face. No, this wasn't real, I was safe. He chuckled coldly. "You really think you have a soul-mate? Be realistic, no one wants you. A broken wolf, soiled by another one. Who would love such a thing? You're still unable to change to your wolf form. Are you even allowed to be call a werewolf? Come back here and maybe I'll be lenient." No, I have a soul-mate. He loves me. He told me. I believe him. "Don't be stupid. If he exists, where is he? You're all alone here. Nobody is coming to save you." **************** When she was growing up, Lyra only had one dream: to see the stars. Now that she is older, she traded it for another one: to die. Even if she was rescued, was she really saved? Scars don't fade easily but her soulmate will make sure she can heal, even if it means not being by her side. Clichés I have broken: √ Main character is special √ Main character's soulmate is the King √ Main character was abused √ Happy ending (Tell me if I forgot something and, damn, I did not expect to be so cliché D: ) Clichés I have NOT broken: √ Main character is rejected by her soulmate √ Main character rejects her soulmate √ Main character gets pregnant √ Main character's soulmate is the "bad boy" or "cruel" type √ "Mine"/ "Mate" he growled. So if you want to read a story without these, you're in the right place! **************** Thanks to Distinctive for the amazing cover! I love it so much (It's my iPod's background) <3 Don't let the number of chapters scare you, they are only about 1000 words each. This is my first story so comments will be much appreciated. Love you all :) Also, if you ever have trouble with the weird names I gave my characters, there is a video of me saying their names in chapter 26. My accent is weird on it, blame that on the fact that I'm French-Canadian :PComplete
The Chronicles of Arnora: The Curse of the Blood Moon
The Curse of the Blood Moon In the Zemorian Empire, monsters aren't just born-they're made. Under the iron fist of Emperor Zandar, the laws of nature have been discarded. In secret laboratories and forgotten towers, the Empire is perfecting the unthinkable: a race of human-vampire hybrids designed for a war that will set the world of Arnora ablaze. When a close friend is taken by these abominations, Owin-a Slayer with a mysterious power building behind his eyes-and Aqua Moonfall, a high-ranking mage, must lead a desperate rescue mission. Their journey will take them from the shifting halls of the Elysium Tower to the fortress of Whitestone, where they must face the Four Generals of Zhagos, each a masterpiece of dark evolution. But as the Blood Moon rises to its zenith, the group realizes that the greatest threat might not be the army of hybrids outside their door, but the secrets hidden within their own party. In a world where light can be as destructive as darkness, the price of victory may be higher than any of them are willing to pay. The hunt has begun. The moon is bleeding. And no one is safe. Book One is finally complete, please look forward to Book Two, The Chronicles of Arnora: The Zemorian Invasion! *If any names in my story are that of real world people it's completely coincidental, I use a random name generator, which creates countless names, to help with the naming of some of my characters.Complete
The Hybrid
I jumped to my feet and punched him in the side. There was hardly an effect. "You're weak" he spat, walking a step closer towards me. I growled as I had had it with this blood sucking devil! My blue eyes fumed in anger as my wolf was released. I am a white wolf. Liam's eyes bulged as he saw my true form. He then smiled ready to fight. I lunged for the bastard, knocking him to the ground. His other minions rushed towards me all attaching me at once. I attempted to fight against them. They kept coming on me and it was becoming too much for me to handle. My fur had gone from a snowy white, to a bloody reddish color. So much blood. I laid down. Maybe just a minute of rest. I saw Liam walk up to me. He looked down at me and smiled. "What's wrong little wolf? No more energy?" He smirked. Then Liam was suddenly thrown to the damp ground by something, a jet black wolf with glowing red eyes. He was beautiful with his gleaming coat and strong legs. The black wolf left Liam on the ground and fiercely killed all of Liam's minions easily. He wasn't finished with his prowl, he turned back to face Liam but realized that the pureblooded vampire had already run off. Then I hear a deep growl. "Mate", and my heart stops. ------------ Alexandra's pack is mercilessly destroyed by werewolves most hated species: vampires. The species has hated each other since the beginning of time. But what happens when she finds out she is half vampire and half werewolf? A hybrid cross species who is on the run from the vampire Liam who wants to use her as a trophy. She meets her mate, Tyler, who is the leader of a ruthless pack called the Silvermoon pack. But will he be able to protect her from the relentless vampire out to get her? ----- My very first attempt at writing a book so be gentle! Many errors and typos!Complete
The Dragonborn's Curse
Torn between the wild loyalty of Aela the Huntress and the dark allure of Serana, the Dragonborn walks a path of blood and destiny. As war rages and the hunt for the Elder Scrolls begins, one choice will change her fate forever-werewolf, vampire, or something far more dangerous. In the shadows of Skyrim, love and power are never without sacrifice. A WLW Fanfiction following the Dawnguard/Serana questline (becoming a vampire). It follows a lot of the story and script, but with variation and expansion. There's a lot of romance, a love triangle, and spicy smut. Much of the story is based off of my most recent playthrough- I had never met Serana before and I truly loved Aela the Huntress as my companion, but once I met Serana, I threw Aela to the wolves, so to speak. I had to write a fanfiction of how I would have loved for the story to go, tying in details from the game. ***Please note, this is an LGBTQIA+ work. If you are not comfortable with that, please abandon ship*** ***If you are here strictly for the smut and don't care for the rest of the storyline, just jump right ahead to the last chapter.*** (I will be posting this on other websites in the future so if you stumble across it elsewhere, it should also be under the name Dakota Parker. I'll share where I post it when I post it in other places in case others have a preferred reading cites.)Complete
When a poor Breton slave meets a master thief who for some reason decides to help her. Viriel was a servant and Brynjolf was a lowly thief. They both fight to stay together and keep each other safe. Will Viriel survive her life as a servant long enough to get out?(description will be edited) Started August 10, 2025. Finished August 15, 2025. Cover is mine obvi(that's why it's lazy I guess). I don't own Skyrim or its characters. I only own Viriel and her pictures. First time writing seriously in maybe three years. Chapters will be published daily(for the most part). This story will contain mature content. Also, I've come to realize that the villain in this story is basically just Cinderella's evil stepmother. I will be writing another Skyrim fanfic after this one with the Taliesin mod.
More detailsContent Guidelines