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Into Skyrim
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Ongoing, First published Aug 10, 2017
Mature
WHY AM I EDITING?
It was so bad. So, so bad. Just a whole lot of cringing tbh. I promise my writing has improved dramatically since I began it!

HOW IS IT BEING FIXED?
•I'm going through one chapter at a time to edit them. 
•I'm going to be mashing 2-3 chapters together to make each one longer, and I'll of course delete the ones I took from. 
•I'm also taking out most of the filler chapters and will either A)edit them into the plot progressing chapters, or B)delete them all together. It'll depend on how much I like the filler chapter.

WHEN WILL YOU BE DONE EDITING?
IDK. I don't think it'll take super long as long as I don't overwork myself and burn out. I'm already making pretty good progress with it, I'm currently editing the chapters now and its going smoothly.

OTHER CHANGES
•There will be more mature language because that's just the way Kayleen/Kayleighn thinks and talks. She's got a dirty mouth. Before, I tried not to use as much swearing, but that just made her seem "not her" for lack of a better way of putting it.
•I also recently had an idea for a third protagonist that I want to incorporate, so I'm adding him into it as I go. 
•And I decided I want to make our original protagonists different races than they were originally to make it more diverse like a D&D party.

You'll see the differences after I'm done editing.
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