Star Shipment (DISCONTINUED)

In a rather peaceful world, the country of Chikara is the superpower, where shipment is the name of the game. Shukka, the capital, is home to Nida and his children, who recently dealt with the loss of their mother. Life after her death was rough for the family, but Nida still made a good amount of money at his job. But, how will this family handle the threat of war, and their now terrorist-stricken country? Find out now, in Wind_Chris's first piece of literature, Star Shipment!

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