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Complete, First published Aug 12, 2017
Mature
A young man of just barely 20 who was the victim of an experiment he never agreed to be apart of in the first place talks to the woman who put him through a hellish life he nearly did not survive. She wants to try and bridge the gap between them, seemingly only because their unresolved tension is making it difficult to fight the war they've created. He just wants her to leave him alone. The fact that this same woman is the person who donated her DNA in order to create him does not help her case, but she has always proven to be a patient and resilient woman. It does not mean she isn't willing to try.
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Something of a bit out of a novel/comic/something I want to create in the future. An excercise in character development and writing out complex situations in a way that doesn't necessarily require too much context.
Warnings: Graphic depictions of violence, discussion of physical and emotional trauma, mentions of death, implied relationship abuse, some cursing
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