Farewell
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Last published Sun, Jan 26, 2014
I've been trying out some writing prompts at school. Write the scene of a murder from the view point of the murder weapon, was the writing prompt I did for this story. I of course, bent a few rules, but I think it turned out quite nicely. I hope you enjoy.
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