Critique Care
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Last published Thu, Dec 21, 2017
Critique Care is a "friendly" facility accepting a wide variety of English and Tagalog books (eroticism, suicide, LGBT, etc.) as its patient, for them to look unto and check if they are healthy enough to be read or not. It also provides the best medicines to literary diseases. The doctor here ensures that the writer of the book will have a worthy visit in this hospital. What are you waiting for? Let your stories have a checkup and cure!
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