The Train
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Ongoing<5 mins
Last published Fri, Feb 7, 2014
In hindsight, I guess I could have done more with my life that what I did but I’ve found every soul I’ve met says that. We all feel guilty for the sins we committed during our time on Earth. but there was never a way we could change that. Until I came along. I opened the door no one even noticed in the Afterlife and some people hate me for it, but hey, there’s a first time for everything.
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