Levels

Levels

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In a utopian world, you'd expect everything to be perfect...right? Of course it fucking isn't, idiot. The only reason it looks that way is because they lock up anyone who even tries to break the "perfect", "pristine" atmosphere. So, if they catch you doing anything that happen to even slightly poke at the governments many laws, you get locked up. How about the right to a fair trial eh? Haha- no. Nobody has time for that. Instead, you're plopped right into the mist of a building. 100 stories, one room for each level. Each is a puzzle that's "supposed to show whether your heart is pure or not." I call bullshit; it's just a bunch of dangerous situations disguised to the public as some sort of magical truth-finder. But then you ask- just follow the rules right? It seems simple. But then you hit teenager years, and all you want to do is lash out against society... Sadly, that's what I did, and so far I don't know if I'll make it to tell you what it's like. In each room. In each level.
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In a dystopian world, where the strongest prevails, having peace is a luxury. Especially when someone from the past is out to destroy everything we have built up over the past 15 years. And with Christmas approaching, our group get to face ten hellish days. Preview: In his fury, the chains have rubbed his wrists and neck raw, despite me trying to calm him down. He suddenly calms down when the screams in the cell next to us switch to the sound of bones breaking. Now he sits with foam on his lips and his eyes wide, looking that way. After ten minutes, the sounds of the boys in our cell have died down, and we all look at the wall that separates us from the crackling of the breaking bones. And then suddenly all is quiet. After a few silent minutes, our cell door opens slowly. From the ball of light from the ceiling, the little girl in the doorway is illuminated. She is completely covered in blood and doesn't move. Then she opens her eyes and carefully walks towards us. And despite everything, my first impulse is to crawl backwards, away from the unnatural calm radiating from her. ------------- After reading yet another great older brothers/younger sister story, where the family gets reunited after years of separation, the sister keeps the secret that she was abused and assaulted all along, and the brothers conceal their work in the mafia, I decided to give it also a try. The output of my story was initially to turn this around with openness and unconditional support and the torture should happen right in front of their very eyes. Because no story is complete without the (un)necessary bloodshed, action, humour and, of course, a bad guy. And who knows, to throw everything completely upside down, the main character may not survive. I won't write warnings above each chapter, because most of them contain violence, blood, torture, etc. Constructive criticism is welcome. Ow, and English is not my first, second or third language. So if I mess up somewhere, let me know!

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