My New Eye {EDITING}
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Last published Fri, Aug 14, 2020
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Brooklyn Saint was as ordinary as a teenage girl could be. Nothing but her grades to worry about, a happy family, a roof over her head- Everything She Could Ask For.
But one night her parents didn't come home. Cops Came Instead.
On their anniversary they died in a car accident.
Since then, she's tried to stay open and keep a smile on her face, but slowly she started to shut everyone and everything out. Her bestfriends, her boyfriend, even her aunt who took custody of her.
When she came of age, she had gottten a tattoo of an eye on the side of her stomach from a famous tattoo parlor. She didn't know why- but it seemed to just call to her.
"Good Luck." Mumbled the man as she left. It Sound Suspicious But She Thought Nothing Of It.
What happens when this mysterious new boy turns up in her school with interest only in her ?
What Happens When Her And The New Boy Become... Bestfriends ?
What should Brooklyn do when she starts to get vision and is pulled into a whole new world ?
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Warning: I Wrote This When I Was Like 13- I'm Trying To Edit And See If I Could Save This Bad Story-
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