The Evil Within

The Evil Within

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This is a short story I wrote as a creative writing piece in school. It is based off of the novel "The Lord Of the Flies" by William Golding. The story is told through Roger's eyes after the boys are rescued from the island. It is advised to read the novel before reading this "spin-off", but not required. Enjoy :) ((I do not claim ownership of the names in the story, I only came up with the plot)) ((Quotes from the story are quoted and cited)
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"i don't give up easily, 'specially when there's a real pretty girl involved." "cute, merridew. that's real cute." When the pilot's daughter crash-lands on a desert island in the middle of the Pacific Ocean, all she wants to do is survive long enough to get rescued. After all, being the only girl on the island with a bunch of school boys and choir boys is no way to spend one's time. Except maybe with the elected chief, Ralph, the intellect, Piggy, the quiet friend and sage, Simon, and the littluns. What she wants most, though, is to keep away from that damn Jack Merridew, who's the most arrogant and annoying boy she's ever met and has some rather questionable friends. But as sparks start to fly between the two of them, the island starts to get more dangerous. Littluns whisper of a "snake-thing" in the woods, and the boys start to lose their grip on sanity and civilization. In the midst of all this, will she stay with the civilization she knows and lose the boy she loves, or stay with the boy she loves and lose the civilization she knows? Note: I will probably go back and edit as needed even when the story is completed. Just a heads-up :) (previous) rankings: #1 in mauricelotf #1 in ralphlotf #1 in piggylotf #1 in rogerlotf #1 in samneric #1 in lordoftheflies #1 in lotf #1 in jackmerridew

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