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The Visitor

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" But you can't deny that there is something....."
" What? The chemistry? You need to be realistic Siddiq, whatever subject there is between us is delutional, wether chemistry or physics. I am not worth it. I am not just a tick all the boxes Siddiqah that you think I am, you deserve someone better. Be realistic. Assalamu Alaik. "

Siddiq is love strucken and helplessly wants Siddiqah to complete half his deen but what could make her think so low of herself?
A tale of how the dangerous pangs of the so called emotion 'love' controls peoples minds and plays with their insticts all the while influencing their decisions. We are always told to fight for love. But is it gonna end up happily ever after or in regrets? 

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