Crystal - A Dragon in Hiding. A Fairy Tail Fanfiction

first off this is the first story I'm writing by myself so I'm sorry if it sucks.
second, this story is about my personal fairy tail oc. It is basically her origin story, it is also kind of a love story kind of not (I don't really know what this is. lol.)
third, I would love to have you guys comment and give me feedback and/or pointers cause I really need it.
fourth, there might be a bit of mary sue stuff in here cause I suck at writing good stories.
-Evie

Hi. My name's Crystal. Crystal Frostlily. This is my story. How I joined the best guild in all of Fiore, fell in love, and so much more. I would tell you the rest but I don't want to spoil the story for you.

DISCLAIMER: I do not own Fairy Tail! I only own Crystal and my other ocs that come in later in the story! All art belongs to and was drawn by me!