Please don't tell me my writing is bad. You can tell me why, but not just that it's bad. Writing is hard and I'm doing my best. Believe me, if I wasn't, I'd be on the ground with a bullet in my brain right now.
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He felt pathetic. He felt worthless. His fellow paladins had no idea how much their words hurt Lance until he was gone. ........
(I WROTE THIS WHEN I WAS LIKE, 12 ,GUYS)