UNTOLD TRUTH

UNTOLD TRUTH

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It's hard to believe how much the world can change in a couple of days, till yesterday she was the cute "daddy's little girl". She was a loving daughter and the most amazing granddaughter, as per her family, but now they didn't even want to look at her. No even a single person was there for her, when she really needed all them. Is that what they call a family? Is that what they swear to give their lives for?Just in case the notepad could've answered her questions, just in case she knew anything better she could've done to herself. How did she end up where she was right now? Only one thing which have seen her entire story, a pen and the notepad. What can possibly be the partner of a person known for her words? Till yesterday, everybody knew her for her compositions, for her poems. The words she tries to put along and give some gravity to her feelings, those words eventually gave gravity to her existence. She never thought that one day will come in her life, she will eventually be so lonely that all that left, would only be the words, the words she won't be able to tell anyone. This might be the first time for her, that she can't even tell her notepad what happened in that room. As she knew, once knowing all of this the notepad won't be able to hold it back and will surely tell anyone it meets. English major, she was destined to be English major, or maybe not. She was destined for being a murderer, as that's what she'll be remembered as at the end. A part of her was trying to hate her existence, but there was a better half of her mind which wasn't ready to accept that she did anything wrong at all.
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