The unseen shadow
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  • Reads 984
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  • Parts 10
  • Time 53m
Ongoing, First published Sep 03, 2017
When I saw her at the park in the dark freezing night, I knew I would fall for her...

With all her brokenness, heartache,pain, distress... she brightens my heart like the moon, so majestic, so beautiful like the twinkle stars between the moonlight.

And suddenly what makes her weep is my agony, and what makes her smile is my target.

My heart slipped out of my hands when I looked at her.

Her eyes so captivating, full of heartbreak and loneliness, of vacant stares and unkept promises. There was no sense of love, no warmth, no happiness.

It's hard not to fall in love with those eyes, dark brown pupils that drown me into deep oceans. 

Love has cast its spells...

And it's hard to reverse the spells...

It's love, it could be nothing else...

***

Sabreena Sa'aad is an outrageous rebellious and shockingly beautiful  18 year old Nigerian. She had everything, the money, the looks, the brain, and also love. 

Drama started when she picked a red diamond ring in a garden....
How would she survive with an obsessed love Reading?
 


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Guys!! I know, I know...lame summary right? But insha Allah the story will be a piece of chocolate cake...umm yummy,can't wait😋. 
Insha Allah it will be a hit!! I mean I hope so...after all you guys are the judges. 
Love you all.


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