Ribbon of Red: Editing
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I lit a cigar to calm my nerves. I was surrounded in the fumes within a few minutes. It did calm my nerves some, but not as much as I would have hoped. Another hour past as did another, and the sinking feeling that I wouldn't see my brother again lingered in the air.
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William Frandenhien, a young sophisticated man whom eagerly awaits his marriage to his fiance and childhood playfellow Elizabeth Broduer; however things take a turn for the worst when a violent killing spree springs into action the day Elizabeth arrives. Now as the souls of the murdered plague the young couples minds, William becomes determined to find the killer and hopefully set the spirits to rest.
The streets will run red in this tale where no man, woman, or child is safe.
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