Along came Eli
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When you meet a true friend, your life will change dramatically. But when you have to choose from your crush and your friends, what will you do?
A story of a girl who finds out what true love really is.
2017 COLOR AWARDS
2018 WATTYS NOMINEE
2019 WATTYS NOMINEE
2020 WATTYS NOMINEE
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Praise for Someone like Eli
"I fell in love with the sex god Eli Hughes. Last night I dreamed that he was in my teapot."
- The Daily Tale
"About as enjoyable as being slapped with a dead fish, but Someone like Eli does deliver a strong social lesson."
- Enid Kibbler
"I love the bit where a Ravan tries to hurt Aaron - nearly fell off my seat."
- Hit the Spoof
"I could do better."
- Zob Gloop
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