A Simple Desire

Darien Mar's life isn't as good as you'd think it'd be.His mother passed away leaving him with his heavy drinking father,who refuses to even look at him.He believes he's alone in his life without his mother until one day when he hears a mysterious voice calling him to meet them.And when he meets the person who is the owner of the voice he can't turn away. This is a short story of mine i made in 2007 i just so happened to find it in my word documents.Tell me what you think!