Why I don't eat sugar before bed

Why I don't eat sugar before bed

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WpMetadataReadTerminé ven., sept. 15, 2017<5 mins
This is a story for a College Creative Writing class I'm taking. We had to write a real or made up memory and this is based off a dream I had 2 days prior. We wrote originally in 1st person but we were told to switch to 3rd person. I did some editing from that version. I would love some constructive criticism. This is my first written story, and I want to know what people think. Summary: A short horror story, not the best summary but that's what it is.
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This is just a small collection of short stories that I wrote for a school project that I wanted to share with someone other than my friends and maybe get some feedback on :) Please keep in mind: • I am 14 years old • I am not a professional writer • my first language isn't English • I got inspiration and based most of these from comics, series, or songs that I like • There may be a lot of grammatical mistakes Feel free to give advice on how I can improve or point out any mistakes, and also give feedback!

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