Aviators: First Draft
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MatureOngoing5m
Last published Fri, Nov 3, 2017
"I swear, I'd burn the city down to show you the light,"
This is the first draft of a story my friends and I have been working on for years. If you have any suggestions, feel free to say them in the comments! But know I may not add them.
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