Goodbye Girl

Goodbye Girl

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Caroline Bates lived in New York, but her parents thought it would be a good idea to move to Colorado. With the beautiful scenery, the big hills, and towering mountains. She starts a new school, gets a lot of friends, and even a special someone. She held tightly onto him for a year, but it wasn't enough. He cheated and they broke up. Her grandma thought, along with her parents, it would be best if she went to a place called Georgia to get some fresh air. As if the hills, and the mountains weren't enough? She's been known to leave and push people away before they became too close, except for Luke. He was the boy that had the guts to cheat on her. Her parents owned a little log cabin in the 'backwoods.' She stayed in it for a few days, breathing in the 'fresh air' they said she needed. She had been surviving on her own for a while. After the first three months have passed, she hears a loud gunshot, and goes to investigate. It was a guy. A guy that made the noise. If she hadn't heard the gunshot, then she would've never met Hunter. Never would've laid eyes on the deer hunter, the 'southern boy,' the boy with the 'southern drawl.' He was handsome to her. But he never takes any notice of her, and goes back to his deer hunting. He leaves, and never comes back. They meet again in the town square after Sunday morning church service. He talks to her, saying that he's seen her before. They become friends, but she has to leave soon. He doesn't know though. He thinks she will stay until death. Will she will herself to stay? Or will she go home to Colorado, and forget all about him? Is she his Goodbye Girl? Copyright©Brittney All rights reserved.
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For 23 years old woman, Gia Florence went through lots of breaks up and she never been in a relationship for more than six months. All because she ends up being cheated or any other reason. She always thinking of a fairytale where the princess meets her prince charming and they live happily ever after but didn't find the right guy to be her prince charming yet until one day, she encounters Lucas Santiago who also her father's business client. She had this feeling that he is different from any of her ex and wants to get to know him. She tries various ways to get his attention but it's hard than her thought. So, she gains all her courage and tries again and again. ***** I waited for a few rings before he picks it up. "Hey Lucas, it's me, Gia," I said. "Yes, I know it's you, Miss Florence. What do you want?" He asks. "You save my number?" I ask to ignore his question. "Even if I didn't save your number, I'd probably already memorize your number because this is not the first time you call me. So, what do you want from me, Miss Florence? I am busy right now," "Come on, it's weekend. Stop working on the weekend, will you? Take a rest and enjoy the weekend." "If you don't have anything important to say, then bye." "Wait! Don't hang up yet." "Yes?" He asks and I know he annoyed right now. "Can you accompany me for dinner tonight?" I ask hoping he will agree. "No." With that, he hangs up. I look at the screen and sigh. ***** Wants to know what happens? Give it a shot! It will be a roller coaster love story but also it is worth it to read it.

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