Comatose
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Ongoing7m
Last published Sat, Sep 23, 2017
'But I noticed something wrong with her. As perfect as she was , she appeared to be fat.
Not trying to be rude I said " Whats wrong with you're stomach?"
She giggled and smiled. Not knowing what to say out loud, she came up to my face and kissed my forehead. With the softest voice, she whispered, "I'm Pregnant."'
Night of a boys 16 year old birthday, he went in a coma. He has no idea what happened to him and he is determined to figure out.
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