Little Mix story in progress

Hi ! I kind of have an idea of where I want to go with this story. English is not my first language so sorry for the mistakes. I know this is stupid because I have only written 3 chapters in which nothing special happens. But I would like for you (if anyone reads this) to correct me and honestly tell me if my English is good enough to continue with this story. Also tell me if my writing style is not too boring. This is the first fanfic I'm writing.

Thanks a lot!
Byeee :)