The 29th Century
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This is a book about 3 kids who live in what seems like a post-apocalyptic world. But all is not what it seems.
Btw this is my first book. Please criticize me to the best of your ability.
Give me suggestions on how to improve/edit my work, and how to continue the story.
Thx peoples and peace out!
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