Return of the Black Eyed Children
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  • Reads 2,010
  • Votes 195
  • Parts 11
  • Time 1h 33m
Complete, First published Sep 16, 2017
The legend of the Black Eyed Children.  Several have heard about it, and some fortunate ones have lived to tell about it.  So, could these creatures really exist?  That's what detectives Adam Scott and his partner Chris Owens are about to find out.


Called out to a homicide, they expect to find the usual.  But what they discover chills them to the bone; the bodies of a male and female lying on the floor, their skin turned white as a ghost.  The only witness is a teenage girl who claims it was three children, with the blackest eyes... she's ever seen.


*****  Hello everyone.  I'm humbled and honored that you've taken the time to check out my story.  If you haven't heard the legend of "The Black Eyed Children" then I encourage you to look them up on Google or YouTube before you read the first chapter.  This is my version of the legend and of course my own twist to the story. *****

Please comment and let me know what you think!!!  And feel free to check out my homepage.  All my stories are Paranormal.   

Thanks again and I hope you'll enjoy it...
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