The loop
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Last published Tue, Sep 19, 2017
Imagine the same day being repeated over and over. And each time you die trying to save the love of your life.
Oh. and you always will fail.
Pretty harsh right?
Well, thats Amanda's life. She wakes up in the morning, knowing what is going to happen. But no one else does. And the only way out of this living hell is for her to live.
Can Amanda save her one true love along with herself?
Or must he die so she can live?
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