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Murder, I Commit

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enough killing murder story teen

After the incident with his father, Ben has been through enough of the world's bullshit. 

Bullied, tormented, and surving through his terrible life with his abusive father and his mother who left when he was 5, he can't stand it anymore.

On that day, he goes into a rampage, planning on killing anyone who dared messed with him. With his own ways of brutally, one by one he picks off all of them, starting with his father who caused all of this.

In this thrilling novel, will Ben finish counting down his list and not get caught by the police and the private investigators finding more and more at each scene, or will he finally get the vengance he's been wanting?


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enough killing murder story teen

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