I'll take care of it (teaser)
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This is a teaser for a book I'm writing, it is only two chapters long so please if you can, take about thirty minutes out of your day to read and let me know your thoughts on it!! I really want to know if it's good or not and what I need to improve on for it to be good and if you guys even like the story idea so again please read and let me know ideas of yours.
Story summary: Follow along with the lives of six high school students as they face some of the hardest challenges anyone has endorsed. Their past will come back to haunt them while they struggle to make it through the hardest time of their lives; high school. Nothing here is black and white, for everyone has a story. To hate just one character seems almost impossible while taking into account how they got to where they are now. Especially with this group of six friends who have to face problems well above their pay grade, but in the mist of all the chaos will they be able to be happy in the end? Or will the death and abuse of others have them slipping into an endless pit of depression and close off to the rest of the wold? I don't believe in happily ever afters and neither do my charters; blood will spill, tears will be shed, and broken people will shatter. The only people who can put them back together is each other but are they strong enough to withstand the beating life has to offer?
Crap summary I know I just threw something together but I can't stress it enough how grateful I'll be if some one actually reads it and gives me feedback!!
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