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Complete, First published Feb 08, 2014
warning: bad writing ahead 

Isabelle Falls once had a family who adored her and loved her, basically, she had a perfect life, until all that comes crashing down. Her mom dies in a car crash leaving her to be the only survivor in that accident. And she's left with a grief-stricken family. At first, they were just sad, but they then start blaming her for the death of their Luna. They abuse her and treat her worthlessly. She was all alone. But one day, when a few dead immortals step into her life, she is in for a roller coaster ride.
COMPLETED
#20 Vampire 
#5 Werewolf

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 it's actually bullshit  so 
now that i'm rewriting, get ready, i'm pacing this shit the same way a studio ghibli movie paces their shit

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S E Q U E L  now up :))
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M A J O R  CHARACTER RECONSTRUCTION
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Warning: This book is currently being edited. So you may notice that the chapters sometimes disappear, this is due to me un-publishing the chapter to edit it, so please bear with me, thank you


and lastly, i hope you really read this: i wasnt kidding when i said it sucked, my characters need improvements, and my story is soooo eh, so. im working on it, so please. people. editing is a lot of work, so old your horses and let me edit, capish?
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