Comeback Queen
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"I hate you." He scowled.
"Well, I never said you had to like me, now did I?" I said sassily.He rolled his eyes and crossed his arms across his chest.
"Keep rolling your eyes, maybe you'll find your brain back there." He glared at me.
"Shut up with your lame combacks, they suck!"
"Your just mad cause you're getting roasted by a girl. What? Is your ego being damaged?"
"I am no being roasted, you are! I'm a savage!" He said cockily. I slapped my forehead and let out a chuckle.
"Last time I checked, you have not said anything close to make you a savage and you have not even roasted me. Dumb ass."
"Oh yeah well, your a ugly! Beat that!" He smirked. Wow. Oh my gosh everyone, give him a round of applause for that AMAZING burn! Nothing can beat that! Hint, sarcasm.
"Your brain must feel good as new, seeing as though you never use it. Also, that was the worst comback ever, I bet my mom can come up with something better then that." I crossed my arms over my chest and smirked at him.
"Whatever." He grumbled and walked away scowling. That's right! I like to call myself the comback queen because I always have an answer for everything. Like if someone says to me: you suck I go: well you swallow.
So do you catch my drift? Yes? No? Maybe so?
****
Riley Greene, the daughter of Maya. Unlike her mother, she is not as bubbly and outgoing or as childish. She is more of a like, how do I say this, a sassy, savage, sarcastic girl with a temper. I'm pretty sure she can kick you but if she wanted to. But hey, she did get some things from her mom. She loves food as much as her mom and can devour her food like a savage she is.
Asher Kings on the other hand, is a typical bad boy. You know, with those secrets and mysterious vibe, girls go chasing after him, big ego, you know??? Any way, he still is pretty scary if you get on his bad side an that exactly what Riley does.
What do you think will happen when there paths cross? And more importantly...What will happen after?
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