The Mystery of Him

The Mystery of Him

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This is an idea I came up with and wanted to expand on but I don't see the point if people don't like it so please give me your thoughts on this prologue and we'll go from there. Genre will change due to it not really being a short story but for now it is. ~Pixi P.S This is kind of set in the Magi universe so if you haven't read or watched it then I recommend you find out what the world is like there as that is really the only similarity.
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Three girls, in three different worlds. Yet they are all strangely connected. They are all haunted by a ghastly creature. NOTE: This story jumps between three different characters in a disorienting way, which I did intentionally (for a reason that I can't say without revealing spoilers). However, in hindsight, I realize that this might also be off-putting to some readers. If you are not dissuaded, you will begin to see a pattern to the transitions (and the reason for them), and I promise you that, by the end, everything will come together and make sense. Anyway, let me know what you think! Is the way I tell this story interesting and mysterious, or just confusing?

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