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Okay. After lots of time developing this Character, you finally have an OC of your own!

But wait..





What?!

You're thinking it's a Mary Sue?!



Well if so, allow me to help you! I'll give you some tips and tricks on how to fix and upgrade your OC!

Just know that once you enter a character into this book, get ready for some honest opinions and criticism on it. Cheers! ^^

Oh and before you go in here, leave the bad vibes out the door please? That would be very much appreciated! ^^


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The title says it all🙃 Ps this book and my other books are going to be edited a lot so I apologize in advance!😅 ▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃▃ All rights reserved. No part of my book should be copied, transmitted or stored In an information retrieval system without written permission from me. Do not repost or rewrite my book on wattpad or any other platforms without me giving you permission... • I do not condone yandere and obsessive behavior or any of The serious scenes and or themes that may take place in this book. • The characters in this book do not belong to me as they are art characters, but the plot does. Do not steal/copy my ideas. • This book may contain graphic and unsettling content as well as detail description of that content. I will put a trigger warning at the beginning of a chapter that contains anything graphic. Read at your own risk. Highest ranks #1 in yandere father #1 In yandere Family
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𝐘𝐚𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐫𝐞 𝐎𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐡𝐨𝐭𝐬 𝐗 𝐅𝐞𝐦𝐚𝐥𝐞 𝐑𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐞𝐫 𝚃𝚑𝚒𝚜 𝚒𝚜 𝚊 𝚠𝚘𝚛𝚔 𝚘𝚏 𝚏𝚒𝚌𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗, 𝚊𝚗𝚢 𝚗𝚊𝚖𝚎𝚜, 𝚕𝚘𝚌𝚊𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜, 𝚘𝚛 𝚎𝚟𝚎𝚗𝚝𝚜 𝚒𝚗 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚜𝚝𝚘𝚛𝚢 𝚊𝚛𝚎 𝚖𝚊𝚍𝚎 𝚋𝚢 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚊𝚞𝚝𝚑𝚘𝚛'𝚜 𝚒𝚖𝚊𝚐𝚒𝚗𝚊𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗. 𝙰𝚗𝚢 𝚛𝚎𝚜𝚎𝚖𝚋𝚕𝚊𝚗𝚌𝚎 𝚝𝚘 𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚕 𝚕𝚒𝚏𝚎 𝚑𝚊𝚙𝚙𝚎𝚗𝚒𝚗𝚐𝚜 𝚊𝚛𝚎 𝚙𝚞𝚛𝚎𝚕𝚢 𝚌𝚘𝚒𝚗𝚌𝚒𝚍𝚎𝚗𝚝𝚊𝚕. 𝗪𝗔𝗥𝗡𝗜𝗡𝗚𝗦 𝙼𝚎𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚜 𝚘𝚏 𝚜𝚎𝚡𝚞𝚊𝚕 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚖𝚎𝚜 (𝚍𝚎𝚝𝚊𝚒𝚕𝚎𝚍 𝚜𝚎𝚡 𝚜𝚌𝚎𝚗𝚎𝚜), 𝚟𝚒𝚘𝚕𝚎𝚗𝚌𝚎, 𝚖𝚊𝚗𝚒𝚙𝚞𝚕𝚊𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗, 𝚋𝚕𝚊𝚌𝚔𝚖𝚊𝚒𝚕𝚒𝚗𝚐, 𝚔𝚒𝚍𝚍𝚗𝚊𝚙𝚒𝚗𝚐, 𝚍𝚎𝚊𝚝𝚑, 𝚊𝚛𝚜𝚘𝚗, 𝚝𝚑𝚛𝚎𝚊𝚝𝚗𝚒𝚗𝚐, 𝚠𝚊𝚛𝚜, 𝚖𝚞𝚛𝚍𝚎𝚛, 𝚋𝚕𝚘𝚘𝚍, 𝚛𝚊𝚙𝚎, 𝚐𝚊𝚜𝚕𝚒𝚐𝚑𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐, 𝚊𝚋𝚞𝚜𝚎 𝚘𝚏 𝚙𝚘𝚠𝚎𝚛, 𝚜𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚒𝚗𝚐, 𝚟𝚒𝚘𝚕𝚎𝚗𝚝 𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚖𝚎𝚜 (𝚐𝚘𝚛𝚎), 𝚘𝚋𝚜𝚎𝚜𝚜𝚒𝚟𝚎 𝚝𝚎𝚗𝚍𝚎𝚗𝚌𝚒𝚎𝚜, 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚢𝚊𝚗𝚍𝚎𝚛𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚑𝚊𝚟𝚒𝚘𝚛. 𝚃𝚑𝚎𝚛𝚎 𝚊𝚛𝚎 𝚜𝚎𝚟𝚎𝚛𝚊𝚕 𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚎 𝚝𝚑𝚊𝚝 𝙸 𝚠𝚒𝚕𝚕 𝚜𝚝𝚊𝚝𝚎 𝚋𝚎𝚏𝚘𝚛𝚎 𝚎𝚟𝚎𝚛𝚢 𝚘𝚗𝚎𝚜𝚑𝚘𝚝.

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