OC Reviews! (And Maybe Some Extra Help) (ON HOLD FOR NOW!)
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Okay. After lots of time developing this Character, you finally have an OC of your own!
But wait..
What?!
You're thinking it's a Mary Sue?!
Well if so, allow me to help you! I'll give you some tips and tricks on how to fix and upgrade your OC!
Just know that once you enter a character into this book, get ready for some honest opinions and criticism on it. Cheers! ^^
Oh and before you go in here, leave the bad vibes out the door please? That would be very much appreciated! ^^
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