Cerise, Ethony, and Blood Clots

When Cerise, a carefree wild-child, and Ethony, a stubborn novelist, uncovers the secrets of the estranged young nephew of Aleishera Brandon-Cormac, a renowned publisher in Ardenfyre, the lives of Cerise and Ethony entwine with something very sinister indeed. Argus Jehnsen is up to something, and no one is safe from it.

Lurking in the darkness of books, secrets are hidden, and Ethony and Cerise must uncover what is happening in the town of Ardenfyre; something much worse than murder. But once Aleishera's crack-head sister, Maria Jehnsen, realises that the two best friends are catching on to her sons' activities, bad things start to happen to everyone in the town.

Neither Cerise nor Ethony are able try and discover the truth without risking their lives. In a place as small as Ardenfyre, there is nowhere to hide.

Their fates are written in ink.
... But who controls the pen?

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This is my first ever serious multi chaptered story attempt. PLEASE give me feedback for each chapter of 'Cerise, Ethony, and Blood Clots'! And please be patient, I get busy! :)