Winter's Girl
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Complete Sun, Oct 15, 20178m
This is an emotional very short story, but it's also my first published piece that I'm proud of.
There isn't much to read but I hope you all enjoy it.
I'd love some feedback, I don't mind if you critique my work, I don't expect everyone to love it as much as I do, but please don't be nasty.
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