A simple writing critique

A simple writing critique

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Are you an aspiring author? Do you often feel like your book isn't good enough, or you aren't sure what to do with it? Do you want to know just how well you write? Then you've come to the right place! This book is one where you tell me to read your stories and I give feedback! It's simple (and free). All you have to do Is fill out the information given in the first chapter and wait for me to respond (it won't be too terribly long, don't worry) So a little information beforehand: 1.) no getting mad and reporting me if you get some constructive criticism, it has happened before and I won't stand for it (thank you kindly) 2.) I score based on the important parts if the story (plot, description, character development, etc) so be expecting me to talk about it and finally 3.) If I like your book I will add it to my reading list and leave it there Have fun and please submit all your stories :) I love reading
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《 Highest Ranking: #5 in Vampire 》 "Is that Marcus? Marcus as in, from our High School Marcus!" Casey squeaked. I spun around, not quite believing her, but there he was. He strode through the school like he owned it and my god, he could've. He'd changed over the four years he'd been gone. It was like god himself had carved him from a statue. His cheekbones could cut a finger and a jaw that could slice a hand. He was taller, more muscular. He looked nothing like the boy that went away. He wore a blacket jacket and ripped jeans, his grey eyes studied the school as every female studied him. Suddenly, they slipped past every other person's eyes and landed on mine. No surprise etched his face, it was like he didn't recognise me. Until I saw the corner of his mouth lift up. ~~ Best friends, Diana and Marcus planned to do everything together. They would go to college and live in the same dorm room, they would always be best friends. But, Marcus went away. Without expecting him to return, Diana uses her heartbreak to change her life. She becomes popular in college.. Then one day, he shows up. But he's changed, he's darker, more silent and definitely a lot more hotter. He'd grown taller, his face sharper and he drew eyes from every woman on campus, even the guys. He spoke to no one and didn't even acknowledge her until she spoke to him. But something was very off. Very off, indeed. Cover Design: @newsies- Copyright @tavanalee No Rights Reserved 2018

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